fiirst character (syta(

Name: syta crince
nicknames:the shadow,
race: dark elf
Gender: female
Alliance: drathea
ranking: top assasin
Height : 5'5
Weight :110
Hair color :jet black and long
complexeion : rather pale but quite beautyful
eye color : blue
Destingishing marks : has whip scars on her back and scars on her legs
History: she was born in a poor house her dad was a theif and she wanted to be like her dad so she tried to steal from the palace and she was imprisoned and guards were sent to kill her family. she was inslaved and. Whiped she eventually escaped and went to drathea to be a soldier. She quickly went into stealth and eventually became an assasin she. rose to the top remarkibly fast .

Besides the grammatical errors, forgot Complextion.

Uhh i had to eat dinner so i posted it

Make history longer, or turn it into more sentances. It shouldnt be one giant run on sentance.

Getting hair done -_-

waiting

There

Avoiding grammactial errors, approved